ledzep45 Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 So, i have recorded a few songs (as i have posted before), and i wanted to hear peoples opinions on 2 of my own compositions. And it would be cool if anybody could offer any advice. Here are the 2 songs: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xZX5TuyaIIU and http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dj7rcIXNjtI...feature=channel To be honest, the quality is really bad because i dont have much space on my computer. If you would like to hear it in its normal self PM me on here or on youtube. Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jarlaxle 56 Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 For the first one... 1: Too repetitive 2: Less strumming, more arpeggios 3: Be more creative with the rhythm 4: Get a better microphone 5: Less falsetto would be nice 6: Use a more conventional song structure, ie: intro verse chorus verse bridge chorus verse outro, etc.. All the advice I can give. Edit: The second song is better, and has a better rhythm and structure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ledzep45 Posted July 6, 2009 Author Share Posted July 6, 2009 For the first one... 1: Too repetitive 2: Less strumming, more arpeggios 3: Be more creative with the rhythm 4: Get a better microphone 5: Less falsetto would be nice 6: Use a more conventional song structure, ie: intro verse chorus verse bridge chorus verse outro, etc.. All the advice I can give. Edit: The second song is better, and has a better rhythm and structure. thanks i am hoping to get a better recorder as at the moment im just using my camera which is god knows many years old and then transfering it as an audio and editing it on audacity. edit: another song of mine, does it fit what you mean: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-pGtnN98gSw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jarlaxle 56 Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 A little, but you need more practice, it sounds kinda sloppy =\ And you or whoever is drumming needs to take some lessons Just being honest.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ledzep45 Posted July 6, 2009 Author Share Posted July 6, 2009 A little, but you need more practice, it sounds kinda sloppy =\ And you or whoever is drumming needs to take some lessons Just being honest.... lol its me drumming. I had drum lessons for 2 years when i was 9 so i am kinda sloppy, thats why its on a loop but thanks for being honest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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