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Zeppelin Led

Ok so I wrote some lyrics please give advice

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Its a homage to some old blues tune.

I'm a taildragger

I swipe out on my track

When I get what I want

ooooooooh When I find what I need yeah'

My midweek jaunt

If she makes my mind lose track

I won't be goin' back

Woah oh yeah mmmh yeah

Woah I'm a taildragger

You know I swipe off my track

When I have what I want you know I won't be coming back

(Instrumental break)

Opinions my friends?

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With help from Howlin Wolf and George Thorogood.

Yes Indeed!smile.gif

BTW I'm 12 and not really developed on writingbiggrin.gif

Not The 2nd guy tho Haven't heard him

Edited by Zeppelin Led

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So do you like it?

I'm planing on it as a song for my band.

As a cover you can do anything you want with the band. And by all means draw inspirations from songs that you do know. I just think that if you are going to write some lyrics for a song, you should draw on your own life experiences and have something that is more original. Even at 12 you would have some things that you feel passionate about. The more you write the easier it may become. Just write your thoughts and feelings and then arrange it in a cohesive manner. It would be more impressive

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Yes Indeed!smile.gif

BTW I'm 12 and not really developed on writingbiggrin.gif

Not The 2nd guy tho Haven't heard him

I thought you said you were 13 before?

You really enjoy the whole plagiarism thing don't you?

I agree with the post above, use your personal experiences. Like the kids at school giving you crap about wearing your Zep swag. Anyway, do what you want - whatever makes you happy as it will represent you.

Have fun!

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Some bukka white influence on this.

Please some opinion

Came Across.Its about my thoughts of death and destruction at school due to others

You Came Across Me

I Have that dark side

Destroyed my pride.

Took my stride

Well you know by now

I'm gonna Shake em on down.

I can't believe what people are saying

Your gonna be yourself

Well they don't think thats right.

Three cigs and a bottle of bud drowned down

Fixin to die but I bet I'm gonna Shake em on down

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