Stairway is NOT stolen Posted May 30, 2016 Share Posted May 30, 2016 Hey All. This is a piece that worked on for College. At the moment, it has no vocals, even though I have lyrics written up for them. I wanted to have a piece that featured a strange tuning, with a droning open string playing throughout the piece. It features a strangely tuned 6 string Acoustic guitar, with a standard tuned 12 string Acoustic Guitar during the chorus. I'd like to hear everyone's opinion on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matjaz1 Posted May 30, 2016 Share Posted May 30, 2016 It's good and beautiful, but it needs more structure and the main riff, is a bit to similar to The rain song, but obviously different. So it's a nice piece of music. Thank you for it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stairway is NOT stolen Posted May 30, 2016 Author Share Posted May 30, 2016 53 minutes ago, Matjaz1 said: It's good and beautiful, but it needs more structure and the main riff, is a bit to similar to The rain song, but obviously different. So it's a nice piece of music. Thank you for it! Thanks for the feedback. i didn't even have the rain song in mind when I wrote it. The tuning I used for the 6 string (DGDFCD) is similar to The Rain Song (DGCGCD), so I imagine that's why it sounds similar. I'm constantly trying to improve my songwriting skills. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stairway is NOT stolen Posted May 30, 2016 Author Share Posted May 30, 2016 Here's the lyrics I wrote for it: Verse 1: From the clouds came the rain The passage of time begins again Upon this uneven journey Verse 2: The sun of this world it shinesShowing how the world declines As we drift away from the truth Chorus: The moon enlightens the path The evil one will show his wrath The world had peace, long ago Verse 3: The land we kept so pure Has caused the change to endure The suffering of the few Verse 4: Standing at the door of the globe Wishing the pain and misey would go My sorrows are all left in the snow Outro: From the clouds came the rain The passage of time begins again Upon this uneven journey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matjaz1 Posted May 30, 2016 Share Posted May 30, 2016 Nice lyrics. quite beautiful and not to idealistic, rather dark but still bright! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteveAJones Posted May 31, 2016 Share Posted May 31, 2016 Try it with these lyrics: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L_XD9d4DCA8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matjaz1 Posted June 1, 2016 Share Posted June 1, 2016 Steve I don't think you found that attitude in your archives right? Nothing else is good but Led Zeppelin!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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