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From The Clouds (Came The Rain) || Unmixed Instrumental Version


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Hey All.

This is a piece that worked on for College. At the moment, it has no vocals, even though I have lyrics written up for them.

I wanted to have a piece that featured a strange tuning, with a droning open string playing throughout the piece.

 It features a strangely tuned 6 string Acoustic guitar, with a standard tuned 12 string Acoustic Guitar during the chorus.

I'd like to hear everyone's opinion on it

 

 

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53 minutes ago, Matjaz1 said:

It's good and beautiful, but it needs more structure and the main riff, is a bit to similar to The rain song, but obviously different.

 

So it's a nice piece of music. Thank you for it!

Thanks for the feedback. i didn't even have the rain song in mind when I wrote it. The tuning I used for the 6 string (DGDFCD) is similar to The Rain Song (DGCGCD), so I imagine that's why it sounds similar.

I'm constantly trying to improve my songwriting skills.

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Here's the lyrics I wrote for it:

Verse 1:

From the clouds came the rain
The passage of time begins again
Upon this uneven journey

Verse 2:

The sun of this world it shines
Showing how the world declines
As we drift away from the truth

Chorus:

The moon enlightens the path
The evil one will show his wrath
The world had peace, long ago

Verse 3:

The land we kept so pure
Has caused the change to endure
The suffering of the few

Verse 4:

Standing at the door of the globe
Wishing the pain and misey would go
My sorrows are all left in the snow

Outro:

From the clouds came the rain
The passage of time begins again
Upon this uneven journey

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