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I get updates to all the threads I am am subscribed to by email, so I have your lyrics in my email. They are very moving and very strong. I think you should post them, just with a disclaimer.

This is are very, very good. Makes me want to hear the song itself.

I have my own lyrics, to, that I will start uploading. One set of my own lyrics I've already posted: I'm talking about my rewrite of Nobody's Fault but Mine. I believe I posted it in the Pet Peeves thread, but I can't quite remember...

Anyways, I'll start posting my lyrics when I see more people post their's. And thanks again, Gainesbarre. And remember, JimmyPageZoSo56, you can post your lyrics. just start off with a disclaimer.

And finally, I need to add a copyright disclaimer because this thread is "borrowed" ( :D ) from another forum, but that thread had to be closed because someone stole the lyrics of a member and made a song out of it, causing a bit of a copyright battle (thankfully, the thief lost, and quickly, but there you go). So, a copyright disclaimer:

All the lyrics above and below this post have been copyrighted by the poster of those lyrics, and you may not use the lyrics without their direct permission.

I will repeat this on every page, just to be sure.

And making that statement does help, BTW... at least in America.

I haven't seen this thread in a long time. I don't even remember the song I posted. :lol:

Anyway, heres on I am still working on.

Machine Gun

On their way over there,

Eat your food, yea

On their way over there,

Check your stuff before you get there

He checks his ammo,

Machine gun in his hand,

Got buttered toast in the one,

Eats with the one, gun in the other

Dont lose it with the others

Chorus

Oh machine gun!

Tearing my body apart!

Machine gun!

Sends my body to the ground.

Edited by JimmyPageZoSo56

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everyone's lyrics are really good, they move me. you can feel it! :bravo:

I just wanted to say that the lyrics I post here on the LZ Forum were, at one time or another, at some point or another in them, inspired by Led Zep so it's ok that they kinda belong here. thanks. :)

On Whispering Winds ©2009 Diane H. ARR

They warn me love can be excessive,

that it's not love if it possesses,

wearing down slippery defenses,

you awaken my visceral senses.

Swirl in and out of my destiny,

the muse falls into the euphony,

I float endlessly in harmony,

revolving, evolving cosmogony.

The stars dazzle the wave of the night,

it seems the moon has had such a fright,

the fanfare courts the sun at daylight,

sky disc worshipers hide their eyes from light.

A band of root nexus unfastens,

placed with ornamental enchasen,

those ardurous hasten to listen,

but the surrendered ones are unshaken.

I once trembled in musical score,

then travelled up through grayness and more,

joyful Spring my Soul's love at the core,

reticent, teacher took not to explore.

I've been the Fool's Leap in the Tarot,

birth and rebirth the Runes Berkano,

I'm not your queen, your not my king, it's true,

but the essence of their love will come through.

Take me there, in your capacity,

conscious heart True Self's veracity,

realms on whispering winds velocity

slow. I await your sound sagacity.

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♫ Freedom (Cosmic Child) ©2009 Diane H. ARR

My mind is out here in the wild,

afloat intended cosmic child,

but not knowing and unsure,

scared moments I'm not anchored,

body mind and soul metaphored,

I'm not prepared for what's in store.

To assert my independence,

once required my attendance,

material dependence,

now I have made my decree,

sword of light won my spirit free,

but between fulsome and empty.

My mind says 'now let yourself go',

I surrender to 'let it flow',

my heartfelt is yearning so,

for the promise that takes hold,

breathless that claims my oversoul,

phasing in and out of self-control.

Freedom is insecurity,

wandering in obscurity,

so, in seeking the safety,

I distanced from the freeity,

there’s nothing to hold on to me,

wond’ring if I’d made the right plea.

I fly to your polarity,

could I bother momentar'ly,

to get my bearings clearly

where one must go fearlessly,

I might find if you stand by me,

the freedom I hold so dearly.

Pass by you in the zero zone,

you, my polarity lodestone,

grasp emotional undertone,

can't achieve oneness alone,

come to music improv Freedome,

where bohemian sets the tone,

in time we'll take off on our own.

note:

"freedome.co.uk"

are events in Glastonbury and Somerset

Freedome is a bohemian jamming space for musical improvisatio,

talent not required! (that's me!... well maybe I could play the tambourine! :huh: )

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here's a song you might have heard...

the controversy goes on... if she singing "I take my diamond shoes" or

"I take my time and choose" ???

"Animato" lyrics Utada Hikaru album : Exodus ©2004

(on you tube...nice tune! :whistling: )

Nobody' like you, no ooo ooo ooo ooo

Somebody out there better get this

Not many people can do it like this

How about some speakers to amplify me

How about a rhyme to fortify me

Life's messy so I clarify it

Simplifying things for everybody

I need someone who's true

Someone who does the laundry too

So what you gonna do

Please don't forget to follow through

I take my diamond shoes

Someone who tries to be on time

Do what you said you'll do

I hope you like to follow through

All that I need's a bit o' practice

My mind is set on bigger business

This is not a time for reminiscing

This is something new and interesting

Why are you trying to classify it

This is music for all humanity from me

Dreaming of hip hop tunes

They say you've got the proper tools

So what you gonna do

Keep doing things they way you do

I take my Diamond shoes

Someone who tries to be on time

Do what you came to do

I came to see you follow through

I need someone who's true

Someone who does the laundry too

So what you gonna do

Please don't forget to follow through

I take my diamond shoes

Someone who tries to be on time

Do what you said you'll do

I hope you like to follow through,

DVD's of Elvis Presley

BBC Sessions of Led Zeppelin

Singing along to Freddie Mercury

Wishing he was still performing. (repeat 6 times)

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I just wrote this today for a lyric-less song I wrote about a month ago. These lyrics are based on a conversation I had with a hypocrite... they preach tolerance, and yet are extremely intolerant to anyone who doesn't think like they do:

Middle Man

Well I know I make you scream

I make you cry

I know you hate the

Person I am

I'm not gonna change

Just for you

You can't make me be

Who I don't want to be

Can't you let me

Sit right in the middle

Yeah

Yes I like to stereotype

I like to hate on everyone

Well I'm a bigot, I'm a racist

I'm a sexist, I'm a hater

I hate you as much as

I hate me, yeah

Can't you let me

Sit right in the middle

Don't wanna be predictable

Like you

(guitar solo)

Don't you see that

You're the hypocrite

Can't you see that

You're the one I hate

You're the one who

Preaches tolerance

And yet you can't

Tolerate anyone who thinks

Differently from you

Can't you let me

sit right in the middle

Yeah

Just let me be me

Yeah

Woah

Hey

(Hevenstone Records © 2009)

Edited by Nathan

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I just wrote this today for a lyric-less song I wrote about a month ago. These lyrics are based on a conversation I had with a hypocrite... they preach tolerance, and yet are extremely intolerant to anyone who doesn't think like they do:

Middle Man

Well I know I make you scream

I make you cry

I know you hate the

Person I am

I'm not gonna change

Just for you

You can't make me be

Who I don't want to be

Can't you let me

Sit right in the middle

Yeah

Yes I like to stereotype

I like to hate on everyone

Well I'm a bigot, I'm a racist

I'm a sexist, I'm a hater

I hate you as much as

I hate me, yeah

Can't you let me

Sit right in the middle

Don't wanna be predictable

Like you

(guitar solo)

Don't you see that

You're the hypocrite

Can't you see that

You're the one I hate

You the one who

Preaches tolerance

And yet you can't

Tolerate anyone who thinks

Differently from you

Can't you let me

sit right in the middle

Yeah

Just let me be me

Yeah

Woah

Hey

(Hevenstone Records © 2009)

I think the concept is good, but the ending is intolerably weak. A progression of words that rhyme with "intolerance", like "indifference", "significance" and "magnificence" is needed to bring the point home. Now get out of my sight.

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I think the concept is good, but the ending is intolerably weak. A progression of words that rhyme with "intolerance", like "indifference", "significance" and "magnificence" is needed to bring the point home. Now get out of my sight.

I've always written out the "yeahs," "heys," "woahs," and so on. Don't ask me why. I have no clue.

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I've always written out the "yeahs," "heys," "woahs," and so on. Don't ask me why. I have no clue.

It still needs a stronger, in your face ending.

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A new song I just wrote. I haven't decided on a key, yet, but this is a slow-to-mid-tempo 12-bar swinging blues (think Stevie Ray Vaughn's "Texas Flood").

A quick warning: if you believe that the USA is the greatest free-market country on God's 6,000-year-old created Earth, and you will defend that belief with your gun, then you may not want to read any further... :P

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USA Blues

Well I live in a strange country

Strange folks all around me

Yes I live in a strange country

Strange folks all around me

You know I love the USA

But sometimes she makes me weep

We're a free market society

Money trumps human life

Oh we're a free market society

Money trumps human life

If the money ain't in it

We'll just leave 'em to die

(1st guitar solo)

Yeah alcohol and tobacco

Kill thousands of people each day

Well alcohol and tobacco

Kill thousands of people each day

Marijuana ain't killed no one

But you can't use it anyway

We got a high gunshot rate

And yet we love our guns

Yeah we got a high gunshot rate

And yet we love our guns

But there ain't no connection

And you'd be a fool and a communist to make one

(2nd guitar solo)

We're the most religious country

In the developed world

Yeah we're the most religious country

In the developed world

Yes we got so much knowledge

But superstition keeps us down

Well the rest of the developed world

Has accepted Evolution (and Natural Selection)

Yeah the rest of the developed world

Has accepted Evolution (and the Big Bang)

Yet the US has got stupid people

Who still believe in Young Earth Creation

Well I live in a strange country

Weird folks all around me

Yes I live in a strange country

Odd folks all around me

You know I love the USA

But sometimes

She makes me weep

(turn-around; end)

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Edited by Nathan

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