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His hair was black as deepest night,

Now it is white as brightest light...

How could this possibly be true?

I know he's great - why am I blue?

Why do I want to cry for him?

Why do I want to give a scream?

He was - and is - a groovy lad,

He never made me feel upset.

He rocks and even at his age

He's one and only on the stage.

He ages - but it's so unfair!

He's young in spirit, can't you see?

I do believe in fairy tales

And wish they did believe in me..

:hippy:

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His hair was black as deepest night,

Now it is white as brightest light...

How could this possibly be true?

I know he's great - why am I blue?

Why do I want to cry for him?

Why do I want to give a scream?

He was - and is - a groovy lad,

He never made me feel upset.

He rocks and even at his age

He's one and only on the stage.

He ages - but it's so unfair!

He's young in spirit, can't you see?

I do believe in fairy tales

And wish they did believe in me..

:hippy:

This is an awesome poem :thumbsup:

I can see him in your words...

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His hair was black as deepest night,

Now it is white as brightest light...

How could this possibly be true?

I know he's great - why am I blue?

Why do I want to cry for him?

Why do I want to give a scream?

He was - and is - a groovy lad,

He never made me feel upset.

He rocks and even at his age

He's one and only on the stage.

He ages - but it's so unfair!

He's young in spirit, can't you see?

I do believe in fairy tales

And wish they did believe in me..

:hippy:

beautiful

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His hair was black as deepest night,

Now it is white as brightest light...

How could this possibly be true?

I know he's great - why am I blue?

Why do I want to cry for him?

Why do I want to give a scream?

He was - and is - a groovy lad,

He never made me feel upset.

He rocks and even at his age

He's one and only on the stage.

He ages - but it's so unfair!

He's young in spirit, can't you see?

I do believe in fairy tales

And wish they did believe in me..

:hippy:

WOW, it's great! When I was reading it I reacalled the poem I've composed devoting to Robert :)

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His hair was black as deepest night,

Now it is white as brightest light...

How could this possibly be true?

I know he's great - why am I blue?

Why do I want to cry for him?

Why do I want to give a scream?

He was - and is - a groovy lad,

He never made me feel upset.

He rocks and even at his age

He's one and only on the stage.

He ages - but it's so unfair!

He's young in spirit, can't you see?

I do believe in fairy tales

And wish they did believe in me..

:hippy:

That is beautiful. You got him perfectly.

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His hair was black as deepest night,

Now it is white as brightest light...

How could this possibly be true?

I know he's great - why am I blue?

Why do I want to cry for him?

Why do I want to give a scream?

He was - and is - a groovy lad,

He never made me feel upset.

He rocks and even at his age

He's one and only on the stage.

He ages - but it's so unfair!

He's young in spirit, can't you see?

I do believe in fairy tales

And wish they did believe in me..

:hippy:

NICE!!!!
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I've got one :)

It's not that good really, not as good as ledtronulsja's.

This is a little love poem i wrote.

Oh Sweet Jimmy Bathed In Light

Oh sweet Jimmy bathed in light,

Upon Madison Square that magic night,

Of colours from red to blue

As I hold my love for you.

And as you play your soul through chords,

Sweat drips from you dark wet curls,

Like those,

Off leaves,

Upon an English summers day

And as each drop hits the bowing stage,

My heart, it skips a beat.

A beat that beats for one.

A beat so strong that drums are drowned

My heart, in the presence of my love,

Flutters,

Like those of a delicate butterfly.

With your eyes a-blaze with an undying love and passion.

Oh sweet Jimmy bathed in light.

There are a few things wrong with it like the face that the first verse rhymes when the others don't and there are a different amount of lines in each stanza.

But hoped you liked it anyway...:)

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I've got one :)

It's not that good really, not as good as ledtronulsja's.

This is a little love poem i wrote.

Oh Sweet Jimmy Bathed In Light

Oh sweet Jimmy bathed in light,

Upon Madison Square that magic night,

Of colours from red to blue

As I hold my love for you.

And as you play your soul through chords,

Sweat drips from you dark wet curls,

Like those,

Off leaves,

Upon an English summers day

And as each drop hits the bowing stage,

My heart, it skips a beat.

A beat that beats for one.

A beat so strong that drums are drowned

My heart, in the presence of my love,

Flutters,

Like those of a delicate butterfly.

With your eyes a-blaze with an undying love and passion.

Oh sweet Jimmy bathed in light.

There are a few things wrong with it like the face that the first verse rhymes when the others don't and there are a different amount of lines in each stanza.

But hoped you liked it anyway...:)

good one.

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I got another one.

I can't remember who it was but someone on the HPOJ thread gave Jimmy the title " Jimmy the heartbreaker" so i wrote a poem. ( I think the female Jimmy Lovers will understand the poem abit more ;) )

Jimmy The Heartbreaker

Oh sweet Jimmy,

How you toy with our minds and hearts.

How you send our hearts skipping,

And invade our minds alive with thoughts.

Jimmy you heartbreaker.

We see you with your dark soft hair,

And wish that we could feel it,

Feel it running through our fingers.

We see it with the dripping sweat that flickers through the bright, drowning lights.

Jimmy, you heartbreaker.

We see you with your smile.

The smile that warms and melts a thousend hearts.

We see your smile from now and then,

how it has not changed.

And sends our hearts a-blaze.

Jimmy, you heartbreaker.

We see you with your slim wet body.

With our hearts beating and racing with drops of sweat.

Our beating hearts gaining speed as the drops continue.

Jimmy, you heartbreaker.

Then it stops.

We cannot hear our heart beat futher,

For we are lost in you beautiful dark set eyes.

How then we wander,

Not knowing if the beat continues.

Jimmy, you heartbreaker.

So you see dear Jimmy,

Dear sweet Jimmy.

Wheather wet or dry you melt our hearts daily,

And give us dreams,

As we are in your presence.

Jimmy, you heartbreaker.

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I got another one.

I can't remember who it was but someone on the HPOJ thread gave Jimmy the title " Jimmy the heartbreaker" so i wrote a poem. ( I think the female Jimmy Lovers will understand the poem abit more ;) )

Jimmy The Heartbreaker

Oh sweet Jimmy,

How you toy with our minds and hearts.

How you send our hearts skipping,

And invade our minds alive with thoughts.

Jimmy you heartbreaker.

We see you with your dark soft hair,

And wish that we could feel it,

Feel it running through our fingers.

We see it with the dripping sweat that flickers through the bright, drowning lights.

Jimmy, you heartbreaker.

We see you with your smile.

The smile that warms and melts a thousend hearts.

We see your smile from now and then,

how it has not changed.

And sends our hearts a-blaze.

Jimmy, you heartbreaker.

We see you with your slim wet body.

With our hearts beating and racing with drops of sweat.

Our beating hearts gaining speed as the drops continue.

Jimmy, you heartbreaker.

Then it stops.

We cannot hear our heart beat futher,

For we are lost in you beautiful dark set eyes.

How then we wander,

Not knowing if the beat continues.

Jimmy, you heartbreaker.

So you see dear Jimmy,

Dear sweet Jimmy.

Wheather wet or dry you melt our hearts daily,

And give us dreams,

As we are in your presence.

Jimmy, you heartbreaker.

I love it. I got it down perfectly. His eyes are green, not that you need to fix it.

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I got another one.

I can't remember who it was but someone on the HPOJ thread gave Jimmy the title " Jimmy the heartbreaker" so i wrote a poem. ( I think the female Jimmy Lovers will understand the poem abit more ;) )

Jimmy The Heartbreaker

Oh sweet Jimmy,

How you toy with our minds and hearts.

How you send our hearts skipping,

And invade our minds alive with thoughts.

Jimmy you heartbreaker.

We see you with your dark soft hair,

And wish that we could feel it,

Feel it running through our fingers.

We see it with the dripping sweat that flickers through the bright, drowning lights.

Jimmy, you heartbreaker.

We see you with your smile.

The smile that warms and melts a thousend hearts.

We see your smile from now and then,

how it has not changed.

And sends our hearts a-blaze.

Jimmy, you heartbreaker.

We see you with your slim wet body.

With our hearts beating and racing with drops of sweat.

Our beating hearts gaining speed as the drops continue.

Jimmy, you heartbreaker.

Then it stops.

We cannot hear our heart beat futher,

For we are lost in you beautiful dark set eyes.

How then we wander,

Not knowing if the beat continues.

Jimmy, you heartbreaker.

So you see dear Jimmy,

Dear sweet Jimmy.

Wheather wet or dry you melt our hearts daily,

And give us dreams,

As we are in your presence.

Jimmy, you heartbreaker.

Awesome! Oh, I can so identify... :wub:

Oh, and I always thought his eyes where light brown with some green in it

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