dazednconfuzed14 Posted April 18, 2008 Share Posted April 18, 2008 i wrote some sad lyrics...if anyone steals them *shakes fist* well i suppose we're all above that... here it goes At first you cannot see A glimmer Cast out by me Trying to call My love My only love Don’t be surprised At what I hide At what I cry I still believe Despite what I know Despite what I’ve seen In my only love I believe In the forest On the breeze There is us My love and me But my love I lost My love’s life has ceased I will be with my love no matter the cost Deliver my love lord please My love is all- all I want I still believe Despite what I know Despite what I’ve seen In my only love I believe I believe one day I will join my love I believe in my love’s laughter Echoin’ wall to wall Though my love is no longer here I believe in my love’s footsteps in the hall Though my love is no longer here I believe I’m comin’ for my love I believe this lying on the floor in pain As the tears rush down my face I still believe Despite what I know Despite what I’ve seen In my only love I believe rate them on a scale of 1-10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jarlaxle 56 Posted April 18, 2008 Share Posted April 18, 2008 I judge lyrics by how well they integrate with the song...so I would have to hear the song they are written for to properly rate them...sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JethroTull Posted April 18, 2008 Share Posted April 18, 2008 I wouldn't worry about anybody stealing those lyrics. It sounds more like a poem. There is no sense of any sort of pattern that a song or even a poem would have. Plus did you have to use the word "love" so many times? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahfin Posted April 18, 2008 Share Posted April 18, 2008 Plus did you have to use the word "love" so many times? Love, love, love, love, love, love, love, love, love. There's nothing you can do that can't be done. Nothing you can sing that can't be sung. Nothing you can say but you can learn how to play the game It's easy. There's nothing you can make that can't be made. No one you can save that can't be saved. Nothing you can do but you can learn how to be in time It's easy. All you need is love, all you need is love, All you need is love, love, love is all you need. Love, love, love, love, love, love, love, love, love. All you need is love, all you need is love, All you need is love, love, love is all you need. There's nothing you can know that isn't known. Nothing you can see that isn't shown. Nowhere you can be that isn't where you're meant to be. It's easy. All you need is love, all you need is love, All you need is love, love, love is all you need. All you need is love (all together now) All you need is love (everybody) All you need is love, love, love is all you need. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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