songbird Posted June 20, 2009 Share Posted June 20, 2009 But that ain't all that they have got 'Cause they've got a brand new little tot named Ross I laughed a loud at that part! Nice one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aquamarine Posted June 20, 2009 Share Posted June 20, 2009 I laughed a loud at that part! Nice one. Nearly as good as "Satanic messages are the boss." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy's A Legend Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 OK I have another one, it is a different style to how I usually write, not full of metaphors, imagary, or romance, it's an experiment, I keep changing my mind as to whether I like it or not. But hey! The Ever Dazzling Mr Page He's Mr Mistoffelees; A musical magician, A master at work. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's a wizard; At the strike of his bow; He captures at play. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's one for the Pagettes; Though with a voice of sophistication, A Lord of Darkness and more. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's one to make you weak; At the blink of an eye; His emerald eyes. The ever dazzling Mr Page. At the click of his fingertips, At the drop of a hat; Hearts are drawn towards him. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's a legend to last; A musical magician he was; A musical magician he is. The ever dazzling Mr Page. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aen27 Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 (edited) OK I have another one, it is a different style to how I usually write, not full of metaphors, imagary, or romance, it's an experiment, I keep changing my mind as to whether I like it or not. But hey! The Ever Dazzling Mr Page He's Mr Mistoffelees; A musical magician, A master at work. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's a wizard; At the strike of his bow; He captures at play. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's one for the Pagettes; Though with a voice of sophistication, A Lord of Darkness and more. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's one to make you weak; At the blink of an eye; His emerald eyes. The ever dazzling Mr Page. At the click of his fingertips, At the drop of a hat; Hearts are drawn towards him. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's a legend to last; A musical magician he was; A musical magician he is. The ever dazzling Mr Page. Oh Lucia!!!!!!!!! It's so beautiful it made me cry. It's as elegant as Jimmy is. I love it! I think it may be my favorite! Now, Renata must make a graphic to match. Edited June 22, 2009 by aen27 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy's A Legend Posted June 23, 2009 Share Posted June 23, 2009 OK I have another one, it is a different style to how I usually write, not full of metaphors, imagary, or romance, it's an experiment, I keep changing my mind as to whether I like it or not. But hey! The Ever Dazzling Mr Page He's a legend to last; A musical magician he was; A musical magician he is. The ever dazzling Mr Page. Thinking about it I would actaully change this line. I would change it to; He's a lengend to last; Future and past. He magician he is. Oh Lucia!!!!!!!!! It's so beautiful it made me cry. It's as elegant as Jimmy is. I love it! I think it may be my favorite! Now, Renata must make a graphic to match. Happy you liked it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy's A Legend Posted June 23, 2009 Share Posted June 23, 2009 Ok I've changed the end stanza so this is the new one. He's Mr Mistoffelees; A musical magician, A master at work. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's a wizard; At the strike of his bow; He captures at play. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's one for the Pagettes; Though with a voice of sophistication, A Lord of Darkness and more. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's one to make you weak; At the blink of an eye; His emerald eyes. The ever dazzling Mr Page. At the click of his fingertips, At the drop of a hat; Hearts are drawn towards him. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's a legend to last; Future and past, The magician he is. The ever dazzling Mr Page. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magenta Posted June 25, 2009 Share Posted June 25, 2009 Ok I've changed the end stanza so this is the new one. He's Mr Mistoffelees; A musical magician, A master at work. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's a wizard; At the strike of his bow; He captures at play. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's one for the Pagettes; Though with a voice of sophistication, A Lord of Darkness and more. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's one to make you weak; At the blink of an eye; His emerald eyes. The ever dazzling Mr Page. At the click of his fingertips, At the drop of a hat; Hearts are drawn towards him. The ever dazzling Mr Page. He's a legend to last; Future and past, The magician he is. The ever dazzling Mr Page. Hey it is wonderful, I love both versions!!!! Bravo Lucia!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy's A Legend Posted July 3, 2009 Share Posted July 3, 2009 OK a new one! This has taken me ages to write. First I know it's exaggerated and over the top. But I'm a Pagette, so what do you expect And also this poem is a metaphor used to describe the spell we Pagettes were under when we became dazzled by Pagey Alone in Darkness I stand. Alone in Darkness I Await. A Lords call. A Presence so mysterious enters I feel it getting stronger, And stronger. I wonder a vortex. Slipping to a world I grow to know; In the eyes of a Lord. As I wonder His hands touch mine; For a moment we are mirrored; Looking into the eyes of one another. At last I fall to his knees; I fall to his spell; His magic; His command. He is now my Lord He is now my master. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aen27 Posted July 3, 2009 Share Posted July 3, 2009 OK a new one! This has taken me ages to write. First I know it's exaggerated and over the top. But I'm a Pagette, so what do you expect And also this poem is a metaphor used to describe the spell we Pagettes were under when we became dazzled by Pagey Alone in Darkness I stand. Alone in Darkness I Await. A Lords call. A Presence so mysterious enters I feel it getting stronger, And stronger. I wonder a vortex. Slipping to a world I grow to know; In the eyes of a Lord. As I wonder His hands touch mine; For a moment we are mirrored; Looking into the eyes of one another. At last I fall to his knees; I fall to his spell; His magic; His command. He is now my Lord He is now my master. He is our master. It's very good, Lucia. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PlanetPage Posted September 23, 2012 Share Posted September 23, 2012 (edited) "Jo haath ko jumbish nahin, aankhon mein to dam hai, Rehne do abhi saaghar-o-meena mere aage".........""Ghalib"" The Hand Fragile although, The eye still shine alive, leave the Goblet & "The Wine," for now, front of me... http:// Edited September 23, 2012 by PlanetPage Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aen27 Posted September 23, 2012 Share Posted September 23, 2012 "Jo haath ko jumbish nahin, aankhon mein to dam hai, Rehne do abhi saaghar-o-meena mere aage".........""Ghalib"" The Hand Fragile although, The eye still shine alive, leave the Goblet & "The Wine," for now, front of me... http:// You're sentiment in lovely. I love this picture. BP has this in his photo stream on flikr and he calls it "Sentimental moment with James Patrick." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PlanetPage Posted September 24, 2012 Share Posted September 24, 2012 (edited) You're sentiment in lovely. I love this picture. BP has this in his photo stream on flikr and he calls it "Sentimental moment with James Patrick." ...Thanks AEN for adding this beautiful commentary that this photo was sentimentally expressed to begin with by BP Fallon...I am sure you made the Poet Happy ( there are times when they are happy, like you said here.... and The Goblet and "The Wine" are "his" possessions...we shall enjoy them together immensley... Edited September 24, 2012 by PlanetPage Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabelstorm Posted September 26, 2012 Share Posted September 26, 2012 hello, this isn't exactly a poem. it's a song i wrote for Jimmy, one afternoon I was jamming with myself (hahaha) and the song just sorta came together Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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