Spacewoman Posted April 24, 2009 Share Posted April 24, 2009 Well, so we will start a new topic only for poetry. And I was so impressed by the poem from Lucia, that I have made a graphic with it This is especially for you, Lucia! and one by myself- excuse the gramatical mistakes and this was made in those times when I was still a Robette Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coda.S Posted April 24, 2009 Share Posted April 24, 2009 Well, so we will start a new topic only for poetry. And I was so impressed by the poem from Lucia, that I have made a graphic with it This is especially for you, Lucia! and one by myself- excuse the gramatical mistakes and this was made in those times when I was still a Robette I liked them honestly , especially the one that u wrote when u were a Robette :D Thanks for sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy's A Legend Posted April 24, 2009 Share Posted April 24, 2009 Well, so we will start a new topic only for poetry. And I was so impressed by the poem from Lucia, that I have made a graphic with it This is especially for you, Lucia! and one by myself- excuse the gramatical mistakes and this was made in those times when I was still a Robette OMG Renata I love you! Thank You for making a wallpaper out of my poem I love it!!! I'm so so happy that it inspired you. Again thank you!!!! And I love the others espically the second, I agree with every word Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy's A Legend Posted April 24, 2009 Share Posted April 24, 2009 Ok well here is the poem that Spacewoman used A feather floats gently to the ground; Resting on a snow white step Picking up this feather; I can feel it’s softness against my hands. My head turns towards a stairway, At the top I see a figure; A figure not of golden locks that shimmer But that of dark curls that play in the moonlight. I find myself drawn to this figure before me; Though I have never seen him. I face him now; Looking deep into his eyes; Lost in the waves of love, passion and lust But I see a lost soul inside there too One that I cannot understand. I feel him leaning in; He whispers in my ear; His voice so gentle, his skin so soft; “I’m searching” I look again in his eyes lost “I’m searching for an angel with a broken wing” His voice broken and tired. He leans in again; I feel his soft, tender lips, pressing against mine I feel my heartbeat Going faster and faster and faster the sound of the bell was loud At a pitch that was likely to shatter my eardrums Signalling the end of the day The rush of fast flowing students pushing its way towards the doors. Edit: sorry wrong poem this isn't the one she used Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy's A Legend Posted April 24, 2009 Share Posted April 24, 2009 This is a Silver Fox one Stepping out, Your silver locks Play and dance. Stepping out, Your eyes, Whisper and sing. Stepping out, The glint in your eyes Revel, The Dark Angel within. Your smile, Remains, Ever heart-warming. Your heart, Remains, Ever devoted. Your years pass, But in the end, Nothing changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy's A Legend Posted April 24, 2009 Share Posted April 24, 2009 Ok this is another one I wrote, finished today during history class Dark Lord Jimmy The way that the shadows, Hide your eyes. The way that your smile, Send chills down my spine. The way that your hair, Silhouettes against the moonlight. Yours eyes, Fill me with shivers. I feel the air around me, Getting colder and colder. Your presence. What’s a Dark Lord’s love worth? The soft touch of his lips against your neck? An eternity? No. To hear the howl of a lonely wolf, To hear the cry against the moonlight sky ..It's not as good at the others I think but I hope that you like it anyway ...Don't fear the other Silver foz one is on it's way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aen27 Posted April 25, 2009 Share Posted April 25, 2009 All the poems are beautiful, and Renata, your graphics are stunning as always. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aquamarine Posted April 25, 2009 Share Posted April 25, 2009 *pssst* I expect this will be moved out of the photos section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonmaid Posted April 27, 2009 Share Posted April 27, 2009 Before it gets moved, though, could someone make a graphic of the Silver Fox poem and this image?...If it's not too much trouble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacewoman Posted April 27, 2009 Author Share Posted April 27, 2009 Finally it is done , guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonmaid Posted April 27, 2009 Share Posted April 27, 2009 Finally it is done , guys! These. Rock. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aen27 Posted April 27, 2009 Share Posted April 27, 2009 Finally it is done , guys! Well done, Renata! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy's A Legend Posted April 27, 2009 Share Posted April 27, 2009 I love them..especially the first one, you really have caught the atmosphere that I wanted to put in the poem Thank You!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacewoman Posted April 27, 2009 Author Share Posted April 27, 2009 I love them..especially the first one, you really have caught the atmosphere that I wanted to put in the poem Thank You!!! I thank you all very much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacewoman Posted May 4, 2009 Author Share Posted May 4, 2009 The next graphic inspired with poem from Lucia... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aen27 Posted May 5, 2009 Share Posted May 5, 2009 The next graphic inspired with poem from Lucia... That's so beautiful..... And Lucia, it's very true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ms_zeppelin94 Posted May 13, 2009 Share Posted May 13, 2009 Let me tell you about a band Everyone should know Defining the rules for all to follow Zero of their songs are boring Especially 'Dazed & Confused" Page's genius violin bow - to him credit is due People crowded in stadiums Every single night Lazer pyramids filled the venue with radiating light In the end, they're the only one Never again to return Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ms_zeppelin94 Posted May 13, 2009 Share Posted May 13, 2009 ^^^Is for a project. And my teacher's a Led Head Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy's A Legend Posted May 15, 2009 Share Posted May 15, 2009 The next graphic inspired with poem from Lucia... Omg how could I not go to this thread I love this one. I think that the pic does go with the poem and I like the angel. Thank You. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfman Posted May 15, 2009 Share Posted May 15, 2009 Roses are red, Violets are blue, Getting Zep tickets is like going to the zoo! Pure Genius!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fsmith9095 Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 Led Zeppelin. The name means so many things to me. It is an entity that is visceral and primitive. Led Zeppelin has weight and mass while remaining mysterious and oblique and ethereal. It is fulfilling as sleep and dirty as a broken bottle in the gutter. It is raunchy and direct, sly and timeless. The songs seems to be taken from the Universal Ether…or as Robert Plant once said “ The Cosmic Energy … “ These songs seem to have always existed somehow and somewhere and it was the massed assemblage and innate talents of these 4 men to bring them down from the ether for us all to experience. The thing about the band is they seemed to make it all seem so natural and casual. It all was presented in confidence and clarity while maintaining a certain mystique. The sound was of a stuttering step of knowing and communication for the world to acknowledge. An icon of the human condition of wanting ,traveling ,power, reverence , glory and the seeking of wisdom. The clarity and mustiness of times and things past remembered with revelry and celebration. It is familiar and strange at the same time. a central nervous system that flexes to life in spite of the time or the location or circumstances. Sweating and seeking something secret and seething. Capturing plain truth and enraptured in myths . The mechanics of the love and lava flowing together, leaping loads of life,love and lava writhing down a volcano from Valhalla. An immersion and diversion into pervsions. You can almost smell the burning elements coming from the overlapping layers of instinct and musicianship. The burnt ozone residue after a storm. The maneuverings and machinations and fascinations. You can almost smell the burning elements coming from the overlapping layers of instinct and musicianship. Friendship, worship, warship . The Demon dreaming and his weaving and semen steaming . Something is right about all they accomplished. An amalgam of spirits set in dynamic azimuths and interlocking time. Vandals, scandals and candles. The unique dedication and honor of a dog smiling , captured with the lively bounce of song.. Pagans freewheeling across the lands with abandon. Balance. Far away lands to explore . .Dragons .. Lightning captured in a bottle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BUCK'EYE' DOC Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 Led Zeppelin. The name means so many things to me. It is an entity that is visceral and primitive. Led Zeppelin has weight and mass while remaining mysterious and oblique and ethereal. It is fulfilling as sleep and dirty as a broken bottle in the gutter. It is raunchy and direct, sly and timeless. The songs seems to be taken from the Universal Ether…or as Robert Plant once said “ The Cosmic Energy … “ These songs seem to have always existed somehow and somewhere and it was the massed assemblage and innate talents of these 4 men to bring them down from the ether for us all to experience. The thing about the band is they seemed to make it all seem so natural and casual. It all was presented in confidence and clarity while maintaining a certain mystique. The sound was of a stuttering step of knowing and communication for the world to acknowledge. An icon of the human condition of wanting ,traveling ,power, reverence , glory and the seeking of wisdom. The clarity and mustiness of times and things past remembered with revelry and celebration. It is familiar and strange at the same time. a central nervous system that flexes to life in spite of the time or the location or circumstances. Sweating and seeking something secret and seething. Capturing plain truth and enraptured in myths . The mechanics of the love and lava flowing together, leaping loads of life,love and lava writhing down a volcano from Valhalla. An immersion and diversion into pervsions. You can almost smell the burning elements coming from the overlapping layers of instinct and musicianship. The burnt ozone residue after a storm. The maneuverings and machinations and fascinations. You can almost smell the burning elements coming from the overlapping layers of instinct and musicianship. Friendship, worship, warship . The Demon dreaming and his weaving and semen steaming . Something is right about all they accomplished. An amalgam of spirits set in dynamic azimuths and interlocking time. Vandals, scandals and candles. The unique dedication and honor of a dog smiling , captured with the lively bounce of song.. Pagans freewheeling across the lands with abandon. Balance. Far away lands to explore . .Dragons .. Lightning captured in a bottle. Wonderful description! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aquamarine Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 Did you post this on the old board, fsmith? I know I've read it before somewhere. Some parts I like better than others--not keen on the "semen steaming," for instance , but good last few lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fsmith9095 Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 Did you post this on the old board, fsmith? I know I've read it before somewhere. Some parts I like better than others--not keen on the "semen steaming," for instance , but good last few lines. Yes,I did post this on the old board,Aqua. Sorry about the "semen steaming" line..It just fits. I know that sort of offends some a bit..but it just came out...no pun intended...while I was rambling. I'm glad you generally like it. You too,Doc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aquamarine Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 Aha--glad my memory wasn't deceiving me! Wasn't offended by that line at all, btw, I just wasn't keen because it didn't seem to fit. But that's creative writing--affects people different ways! Btw, I'd be flattered if anybody remembered something I wrote, years later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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